Reminder For Roleplay because I will forget. rate?

The great city of Half was developed by the military leader Nuno Oathbreaker was given its name due to its military sucess. More than half of the troops would always return. They always at least wipe out half of the enemy troops. Half of the population, or greater, would be willing to fight for their country, including women and children. Children begin to train at the age of ten, usually willingly. Though many women were willing to fight, they had more than enough men and children that they forced the women to stand down and be treated as most women of that time period. This town is full of crooks but non disloyal to their leaders and king. There is currently no heir to the throne (unless you choose to make a character of one).

A stranger had come to this city about ten years ago, however this stranger what from this city. Rein, a young girl who had left the city, running away, at age five had returned at age fifteen in hopes to become a soldier and possibly to meet the one she will be with and love. Rein returns to the town with a completely different appearence and is now skills in duel wielding daggers which originally gave her the appearence of a thief. No one knows who Rein is when she returns infact no one knows anything except for her battle scar and her new name Belcoot.

Name: Rein (known as Belcoot in the city of half)
Age:20
Hometown (or where you are now): Half
Background: Ever since she had turned five she had her heart set on becoming a warrior. Being restricted she ran and returned ten years later with her hair cut short and dressed an a man's clothing. While she was away she trained with a dagger in both hands and leared of a milled herbal remody that she could apply to her face to make her look more masculine, allowing her to take part in the wars. Within the past five years she was given a scar down over her eye by the blade of the enemy. The person what the only person who managed to catch up to her and hit her. Her fighting style is swift fast and destictive.
Looks: Brunette with green eyes. Almost always wearing leather gear. Her face appears to be that of a man due to her herbal remedy which she can wipe off and apply at anytime but she tends to leave it on and reapply constantly unless she feels that it is ok. Thin but with muscles like any other soldier would.

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