Rayner and Karri- Part of a story.

Hello, so you may rate if you want, you don't have to. I just wanted to get it out there and see what people thought. This is a story that is very important to my friend and I, it is messed up... Badly, but I enjoy it. So here goes.


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The scene seemed so familiar. Walking through the valley, Karri couldn't help but wonder where she had seen it. 'The dream' she thought, her jaw almost dropping and excitement filling her mind 'this is my dream.' There was nothing to be seen except for the large dark ship in the distance behind her and a large assortment of small planets floating around her.

They were all sizes and shapes, some were blood red, some were blue and orange. Nearly no two looked alike. Karri stepped further out into the valley, her feet leading her like it was natural. She had walked this path many times. She knew that at the end, there would be a shadow, a person, that she couldn't reach. "No Karri" she told herself "this isn't that dream, this is real."

She could see the end of the valley now, the anticipation was becoming too much to deal with. At long last she was able to see the shadow, standing as it always did. She took a few more steps, expecting to be stopped by the barrier that always held her back. When she wasn't, she picked up her steps and began walking quicker.

When she finally got close enough to see who stood there, it all made sense. Rayner stood, looking at her with a grin on his face. He said no words, just gazed at her with his golden eyes, long silver hair flowed out behind him as he closed the last few steps.

He didn't take his eyes off of her own even as he reached into his pocket and pulled out a small box, no words needed to be spoken as he got down onto his knee, the electricity flowing under his skin captivated her even more than the fact that this was happening.

Rayner opened the box, his eyes still on hers. He didn't need to say the words, his eyes said it all. Karri had never seen him look this nervous. She held out a thin hand, nodding her head as she did. Her red hair which was in a loose up-do bounced around with her head.

An even bigger grin spread across Rayners face as she nodded and he slipped the ring onto her finger, then took her hand to help himself up. He pulled a little too hard and it sent Karri tumbling down, the both of them falling. Her top half laid on top of him, they could feel the other person laughing, the closeness was all they could ask for right now.

Karri rolled off of him and laid by his side, looking up to the sky, things were going to change even more than they had, and they were ready for it.
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As you might have guessed, judging by the fact that he literally has electricity running under his skin and there are small planets (Dont ask, I had a dream about them) Rayner and Karri are not human. However, they are very important to us, please give me some opinions. This would be quite far in the series, but I just wanted to write a cute part