My New Character Brianna G.Hirtz and some new ones

An African-American, fourteen year old walked the territory of strangers. She was new to this town and practiclly her new world. Nobody really knew who she was.Her personality was really quiet,mysterious,and sweet.Some people have gotten on her bad side and have paid the price. Her family was all she had until she gained a new power.One that she has yet to discover.Her name is Brianna G. Heriz. She always knew she was unlike many other girls but never really let it sit in her mind fully.
Brianna started to have a flashback from six months ago:
"Brianna,I wish you could stay..but-"
"But what mom? You knew I couldn't stay since the day I was born.I don't want to here it.Dad even didn't even know I couldn't stay.I'm leaving tomrrow.I will vist when I can so-"
"You can't visit its aganist the rules.It will be the last time I see you until your eighteen.Please be careful. Don't do anything you will regret in the future.Bri,Just be careful.I will call you soon."Bri's mom gave her a hug and walked out of the doctors office door.
Brianna sat in the office.She was about to cry be decided not to.And this was the day her world changed forever.



*I WILL REPORT YOU IF YOU STEAL MY CHARACTER.I WORKED HARD ON THIS..WELL MAYBE NOT MY BEST.





Edited on 9/3/09

Name: Emeliyn {Aka Emmy} Hadnley

Age: 5

Looks: Short brown hair usually up in a ponytail. African American. Is two inces shorter than her sister. Has freckles on her face.Loves to wear dresses, mainly pink or red. Always has some type of bow in her hair even when they don't match. Poka Dots are also common on her clothing.She also has big brown eyes from her Mother.

Personality:Shy towards strangers. Very quiet if something is wrong. She will defend her sister no matter what. When she is happy she might get a little to excited and say somthing that she was not suppose to say if someone told her a secret.

Other:She has a bone disease that is Mild. This is why the white around her eyes are blue.


Name:Evangelina {Aka Evvy} Hadnley

Age: 5

Looks: Long curly black hair that is usually tamed with a hair band. Unlike her sister is likes blue and green. African American. She is two inches taller than her sister.She loves plaid,she hates Poka Dots.She never goes out with out a ribbon on her wrist. She mainly wears Dresses also but in Plaid and blue or green.She loves sandles and hates sneakers, also loves Boots.She has big green eyes like her father.

Personality:Very outgoing,will stand up for anyone she cares about. Is shy towards new kids at times. When something is wrong she is the one to babble it out. She is always the happy one out of the two. Even if you say that something bad happened she will always be the one to make you laugh.

Other: Has the Mild bone diease like her father and Sister.